Thanks very much for the kind words and constuructive criticism, exactly what i was hoping for
Yes your right about using a tripod. I would have liked to have gone with a story board and tripod but this was just captured footage taken on the day (fortunatley it happened to be very quiet on the day) with no real plan. It was only later after viewing the captured footage that i decided to make a little documentary
I must say that i am a little disapointed in the fact that 32 people have viewd the video and only 1 has commented

How can i hope to improve if nobody comments- good or bad