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phreekmepleez · #1 (**permalink**) 07-29-2006, 10:37 AM

hi
i'm kinda new to all this movie making business
i did a few things as school projects but thats it
anyways, this is my first real attempt at film making after reading up on the techniques and all that
it's my first time using vegas 4.0 too
anyway's, heres the link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4Y9jGgDt30
it's for my classes carwash

stef2004@mail.com · #2 (**permalink**) 07-30-2006, 12:31 AM

good first start! I have two peices of advice. 1: Dont make it take so long for the car to get dirty...you could even change that peice of the film completly, just have somone drop somthing out of an apartment window or something onto the car, have the kids run in...and tada...or not, just quicken that part up...2: work on the part where you have the kids running in to clean the car, the main charecter (girl) gets in there way...its a very good idea/concept though! I cant wait to see improvments/other films from you! Great job! and good luck!

Chapman Photography · #3 (**permalink**) 07-30-2006, 02:46 AM

I agree with the previous post, but just remember its your film and your idea. Take the advice of others and do what you want in the end. At the end of the day its your name on not any one elses.