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Old 06-17-2006, 06:23 PM
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Well as practise to the run up to our first film we decided to film and edit a trailer/opening sequence to a dummy film. We were extremely happy with the out come and have learned from experiance. Thoughts and crits welcome.


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Yeah, its just a mess around to get to grips with filming and the software we have.
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Old 06-17-2006, 06:30 PM
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I can see what you are after, but there isnt enought actually going on, it's dull. Too much black and the titles are on screen to long for me.

Same content at half the length may be better.

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Thanks for the comments, I agree with everything you have said, the black does seem a little over done.
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