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06-17-2006, 05:40 AM
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I did this short film in less than 20 minutes. I was bored so I just ran out and did some close up shots. This Film is about our progression of our world as you can see it goes from Nature to Man Made things to seeing the sky as the limit. What do you think of the film? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6EDKD05tEqw |
06-17-2006, 08:52 AM
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A little too repetitive for me. The best execution of that idea I have ever seen was in an episode of Moonlighting. It started where you did and shot through everything including mass industrialisation, Hitler, the A bomb, racial divisions etc etc etc. A bit of an unfair comparison I guess since you dont have ABC Television behind you. If you added more elements I think it would work better. I do like the close ups you did though. Keep at it!
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06-17-2006, 01:58 PM
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This was what i thought :'oh! it's just trees'. But hey, nice try. Maybe try something like a bird jumping off a leaf, or ants crawling on sticks, etc.
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06-17-2006, 02:54 PM
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Good to see what a creative mind can do in 20 minutes. Relaxing, pleasing imagery.
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06-17-2006, 03:54 PM
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Nice. Maybe some of those close ups could have moved, or were they stills?
I tht some of the shots could have been longer as the composition was nice, I especially liked the one with the rope in. I would like to see some more like this from you but with more time spent on it.
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06-17-2006, 04:02 PM
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Thanks for the feedback guys!! The US team plays Italy today, GO USA!!
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06-17-2006, 05:25 PM
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Originally Posted by ritsoccer86 ....GO USA!! |
I know zip about footy. Except that the USA are rubbish at it. Stick to throwing balls/missiles around (delete as applicable), you're good at that!  |
06-17-2006, 08:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Turn Media I know zip about footy. Except that the USA are rubbish at it. Stick to throwing balls/missiles around (delete as applicable), you're good at that! |
you are good at not bringing no goodwill to this world. you are not good at getting rid of terrorists from this world. you are not good at helping the poor. you are good at football though, thats about it.
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06-18-2006, 08:34 AM
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Yep, thats us. |
06-18-2006, 10:56 AM
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I am not even any good at football, but I did give a begger a fiver last week, and if Osama came round I would tell him off, and Bush for that matter.
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