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06-08-2006, 03:07 AM
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| | My first short
It's only a small part of a presentation for my college comp class, made in kind of an interesting way. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8-8DstQFh8s | 
06-11-2006, 11:42 PM
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Not bad! It could have been edited a little tighter. Theres a few black frames that should be cut. Its an interesting idea, keep it up!
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06-12-2006, 02:57 AM
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I liked it. Good work!
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06-12-2006, 10:57 AM
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Ahh, the good old preliger archive.
I enjoyed that, could maybe have been a bit tighter / shorter, I tht the black frames worked ok.
I love the cool man and I made this using him... http://www.zaskarfilms.com/filmPages/ftbpage.htm
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06-12-2006, 09:42 PM
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Thanks for the feed back!
I defiantly agree it could have been edited tighter, and my original project was much shorter (almost a min). The entire presentation was supposed to be 45 mins, so I had to increase the duration of many scenes. Another problem I had with the short cuts is with the very few voiceovers’ I had the film was a little to fast for an audience to understand. I ended up playing on a large projector via DVD which looked quite good, and it seem liked the class enjoyed it.
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06-13-2006, 01:24 AM
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I'm glad it went well. you did a good job.
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