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06-04-2006, 05:47 AM
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06-04-2006, 10:06 AM
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Nice idea. I liked it as a concept for a video and I think you should do more like it.
I dont think the driving fitted at the end and those reaaly interesting close ups need to be steadier and the pans smoother I think to get the best visual effect. It would work longer too.
The close up on the face really got my attention. Music worked.
Nice to see something a bit arty and experimental.
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06-04-2006, 05:55 PM
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Definitely on the pans and zooms, a tripod would have done you well, maybe the driving would have fitted better at the beginning, travelling to where you wanted to go in your thoughts/dreams.
Nice clip though. enjoyed watching.
Thanks
Mike.
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06-04-2006, 09:25 PM
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Yep, a nice effort, I get the feeling there’s some lovely sentiment behind this. Sweet & simple always means good to watch, in my book and this really appeals to me personally. Tree bark and shadows are random patterns that always fascinate.
I agree the driving looks slightly out of place. |
06-04-2006, 11:07 PM
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Thanks guys, I appreciate the feedback. |
06-05-2006, 10:09 AM
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Good effort. Would have done better if you make use of a tripod. | | Thread Tools | | | | Display Modes |  Linear Mode | 
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