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Old 05-16-2006, 03:48 AM
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Hey everyone, I would appreciate some feedback on this video I shot lust summer in Ukraine. I am not professional, in fact this is my 3rd video. So I am eager to learn from the mistakes. However, someone has to outline those mistakes to me.

I've uploaded it to Metacafe due to absense of my own webspace.

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http://www.metacafe.com/watch/130877..._in_shampagne/

Thanks for any constructive criticism
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Old 05-16-2006, 09:00 AM
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Realy enjoyed this. Great cutting to music.
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Wow, I'm seriously impressed!

For a "third" video, it's stunning. Well shot, excellently edited, effects fit the video, music and images meld together. It could have looked tacky but it doesn't.

Top Marks!

I'd even go so far as to say that I find it hard to believe that this is only your third video.
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Very nice mate. Think I must pay the Ukrane a visit.
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Old 05-17-2006, 01:23 AM
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Truth is - it is my third video
My first one was
http://www.metacafe.com/watch/127145/prodigy_fire/
You can hopefully see the difference

Thanks for the comments
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Excellent. Appeared to contain every 'rude' video cliche going and suited the tune very well. Maybe a tad heavy on the colour curces but that is being fussy.

Very, err, creative. Perhaps it should be in adult and the girls should, no, nothing....
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stunningly good - a really effective movie with all the right cuts and effects; nice to see some talent at work . . .

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Al1, you're right, you have improved, but your first video was very good as well!

I really enjoy your work, I'm not going to comment on technical things or the occasional shot, I think you have imagination, energy, experimentaion and innovation.

Welcome to videoforums, you put a lot of us to shame!
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