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Old 05-01-2006, 05:46 PM
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http://www.zippyvideos.com/915520550...fortminorgold/

watch that version, of the two which version is better?

-this new version is brighter, i dunno if i like it brighter...ruins the quality to me...

-i changed the swing part in 3rd beginning scene, better?

-the middle scene of the random back pauses on her i changed it to something else....better?

-last scene i added something also..which i like.
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I liked it very much, I would like to see some other work to.
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all of my work is at http://www.nelproductions.com
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I think the changes make it stronger, the "swing" is much better now!

I still think that it's a bit slow towards the end (third quarter) but I see you've worked well with the material you've been given.

I don't see this version as "brighter", just that it's not so introverted as the first one. A definite improvement IMNSFHO
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i made some opf the outside scenes brighter as i thought the girl being darker in the room added more... My conclusion tho for the outside scenes that needed to be brighter is, its just a very dark scene, so dark if i make it rbighter to make it noticable, it will no matter what look worse.
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My mistake... I misunderstood how you meant "brighter". I thought you meant the mood, not literally lightening up the images.

I agree that lightening the outdoor scenes was an improvement.
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