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Old 04-17-2006, 02:10 AM
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ok this is my last breakdancing vid in a long time, its of a event in Philadelphia last night. All the comments and advice that I receieved was sort of incorporated into thiss video. M approach/style to this video is diff from the Circles 7 one.

check it out and lemme know what u think!!

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A definite improvement. Keep it up!
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Great stuff dude - a couple of pointers!

Subtitles cound be a lil smaller and would have liked subtitles on the second guy too as i had to listen back 3 times to understand him.

Brightness & Contrast - This looks better but it still neeeds tweaking. Basic rule - blacks should be black, not grey not dark grey but BLACK!! Go by this and it'll look fab!
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Old 04-17-2006, 11:40 PM
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ok! lol the thing with the caption is i wasnt sure of it being too big or small. Cause I assume people watch the vid thru the lil mini player and with it being so mini, smaller caption wouldnt be readible. thx mark u the shiz!
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Ha Ha thats is cool.

The music works realy well!
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Old 04-18-2006, 12:48 AM
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yo i just fixed the brightness/contrast and saturation lemme know if it loooks better!!!
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Old 04-18-2006, 03:59 AM
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haha opps after i put the updated vid up, not only did i realized i didnt adjust all the clips within the vid lol but also accidentally had the song moved. ok aha all fixed now
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Hi sixth

Looks great a definate improvement on the other breakdancing vid. The music doesn't do it for me, but thats just a personal taste thing from me. The video works well with the music but i would of chosen a better track.

All in all a great vid
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so so so so much better than the last one. It had something for everyone, from interviews to multiple angles. The music was cool, I'm guessing it reflects the scene? my only suggestion would be next time maybe get a second cam man on the go, really mix up the shots a bit ya know? but otherwise, you've been learning well, good work man!
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