That’s a huge improvement right there, I didn’t get bored and I didn’t skip forward through a long intro scene. I liked the quick cuts as they kept things interesting. However, and I may be off here, but I’m sure how well it showcased your taletents. For example, if you were trying to land a job on a documentary I’m not sure if this demonstrates your ability to get the required shots. Maybe different reels for different aspects of your skills? Anyway, looks much better, much more watch able.

Peace
Chain Lube

Nice video! I'm a traceur myself, although there was about three seconds of pk in there, the video overall was really watchable. A lot of it was just "hey look, i can edit," I felt, but hey, what the heck, you can edit

Getting the same QT error and crashes to desktop.

Holy shit! That second one really is a huge improvment indeed. Really enjoyed watching it. There were no boring moments. Offcourse it was shorter, but a lot more interesting as well.

Off the top of my head I really don't have any complaints about that. Great job.