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02-20-2006, 08:59 PM
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Let me know what you guys think! What can I work on? Are the tricks too cheesy? To overused?
The link: http://www.1011films.com/Clips/chips2.mov
Thanks!
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02-20-2006, 09:25 PM
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You know I think your video is screaming out for some sound effects to be added - the sound of gulls, the sound of the sea, the sound of sand being kicked, the chair moving in the sound, the frizbee whizzing by...
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02-20-2006, 09:29 PM
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cool idea. Maybe I'll try it out.
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02-21-2006, 10:29 PM
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Well I enjoyed it!
I didn't find the "tricks" at all cheesy, the only thing I would like to have seen is perhaps a third person in the latter part of the video, by which time it was getting a bit monotonous. The cello wasn't quite enough to spice it up for me.
Just my opinion.
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02-22-2006, 01:59 AM
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I really liked the simplicity of the shots, with the clean colours and the contrast between the chair and the sand. However I agree with The Guru, it became a bit too repetitive after about a minute, so something needs added to mix things up. Good work.
Peace
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02-22-2006, 02:19 AM
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awesome
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02-22-2006, 07:48 PM
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I have to say it was quite good. Thumbs up really. The shots were simple as said, but that was the beauty of this video.
I don't agree on the sound effects part tho, I think the video is fine as it is really.
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03-02-2006, 05:51 AM
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thanks a lot, everyone!
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03-02-2006, 09:03 AM
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Brilliant. That is one of the best vids posted here recently. Just one thing, I think it would have been even better without the clouds.
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03-03-2006, 07:01 PM
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what is that track? i love it?
i think the video is amazing - i love it all. tre bon!
dave
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