Tiny Portion Of Movie I'm Making At School

grewell912 · #1 (**permalink**) 02-16-2006, 11:57 PM

Here is a tiny portion of the movie im making at school... What you are seeing here is the actor in an old abandoned cemetary, and the red eyed viewport is supposed to be the eyes of a watching "creature"... what do you think??

http://media.putfile.com/Effect45

Llameante · #2 (**permalink**) 02-20-2006, 12:32 AM

I like the the monster's viewpoint, but I think that the shots of your protagonist walking in the graveyard could have been better composed. The view could have been a low shot of him lifting up the cross, with the camera right next to the cross, so the audience really knew that he was on a serious mission. The shot where he's looking around might have been more static, looked almost as if it was the monster w/out red eye.