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Old 01-27-2006, 11:54 AM
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Heres a trailer for a DVD we put together for Our web site www.lewishillbillies.com

Please have a look and give me some feedback.

http://www.lewishillbillies.com/jue/westernfront.mpg
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Old 01-27-2006, 12:18 PM
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No video for me on that link.
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Old 01-27-2006, 12:31 PM
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Anyone else have a problem with the link? It works fine from here.

Try this page instead.

http://lewishillbillies.com/teaser.html
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Old 01-27-2006, 12:41 PM
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Got it now. That looks like fun, if a bit chilly. Nice as far as it goes, but maybe you could have had some shots whare you are really close to the action and maybe some stuff shot from on the machines.

Music suited. I would have taken a few more risks in the edit, jazzed it up a bit with some fast cuts and stuff. I think I often say this but adding the human element makes a vid more interesting too, y'know, the pilots (?) talking about what they are about. This may be a bit harsh as you said this was a trailer.

This site makes me want to go out and do crazy stuff, a few days ago I was all 'microlight microlight monument valley mememe', now I am all 'skidoo skidoo skidoo'. Just need some cash !

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DOH. Just watched again, there is some on board stuff. Maybe some more ?
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