Thanks Marc,
Indeed they do look miserable, apparently they had just got off the plane and went straight to the London Eye!)
I tried to build up a story...obviously didnt work
Day one... London Eye...Tube to...river trip.....
Day two... Breakfast...bus to...alton towers
Perhaps a "fade to night" or titles to seperate the two days would help?...
Ill have a look at the front end...it was rushed as usual and your right it does start far too abruptly...
Main thing is that the speeded up bits didnt make you feel sick?
Thanks for the advice, just what i needed
Luke... Only about half the clips are actually speeded up.... I think its the music and fast cutting that makes it all look a bit fast...
are there any bits in particular you would suggest slowing down?
Cheers