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11-05-2005, 02:57 AM
| | Member Video Editing Junkie | | Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Camden County, NJ
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| |  My first script.
Ok yeah I know this sucks, but hey i tryed right? LOL anyways here is the Script to a short im planning on working on. I wrote this in one day so its not great at all I know and its my first one. I just wanted to see what you guys thought about it? Tell me if I did it in proper format if you could. Thanks http://www.geocities.com/fusion_keep...lent_Night.doc |
11-05-2005, 09:33 AM
| | Senior Member Video Editing Junkie | | Join Date: May 2005 Location: Sidcup, Kent
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couldn't comment on the format as I'm no expert but I like the idea, its got some nice touches in it.
I like the fact that Santa just has to finish the milk and cookie even though he might get caught.
Should be good when you film it.
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11-05-2005, 10:14 AM
|  | Administrator | | Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Kent
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The very fact that you've taken the time to script what you're filming suggests attention to detail. Doesn't matter what it looks like IMO, just that you've tried!
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11-05-2005, 11:29 AM
|  | Senior Member Mr Crane Man | | Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Retford, Nottinghamshire.
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Really good. Schmoltzy, but then Christmas is all about schmoltz. I look forward to seeing the finished movie on Christmas Day. (If it snows by then) :lol:
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11-05-2005, 12:26 PM
| | Senior Member Video Editing Junkie | | Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Bladon
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this is relly nice script and i would love to see the finnished script
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