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Old 11-04-2005, 01:55 PM
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The groups thoughts on this Intro would be helpful

only 6/7 secs long

www.harry73.fsnet.co.uk/film/corvus.wmv

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Way to busy for my taste.
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Way to busy for my taste.

I would have to agree, just too much happening, it needs to be toned down a bit
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it is impossble to read the text and is far to busy.
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Old 11-05-2005, 02:55 AM
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This is kind of crazy, but hey I like the attempt like everyone said just tone it down and it will look pretty cool.
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I agree with eveyone else - I might add - sorry if its harsh - I think the colours clash really badly making it a lil ugly - sorry jus my opinion.
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I agree with eveyone else - I might add - sorry if its harsh - I think the colours clash really badly making it a lil ugly - sorry jus my opinion.
i agree!
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the audio is cool, but i agree with the others... a simple black background with white text would be just as effective...
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the audio is cool, but i agree with the others... a simple black background with white text would be just as effective...
sorry moaldy but i partially disagree with you on this one - Jack is letting his creative juices flow by stepping out of the "white text on black" box. To go that way isn't really all that creative - its just plain and normal. In my view his colour choice is just a lil off but he is getting there. If he can get a good colour combination it will look sweet.


Jack - the reason why it's too busy is all the foggy/smokey effect on the text - that makes it un-readable
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Old 11-06-2005, 10:44 AM
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I agree with you all,,,,way, way to loaded.......shouldn't have put the one with the filters up.............

The effect i was after is more the movement/sound

Don't like normal txt,,, do like stepping out of a box hahaha

All your comments are constructive which is what this group to me is all about,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so keep being honest and i'll keep working on things

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