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Old 08-02-2005, 08:12 AM
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Hello everyone,

I made a short music video, let me know what you all think. :

http://www.4get2.com/video3.wmv
Right click save as....(20 meg file)

EDIT : December 22

http://www.4get2.com/Default_0.wmv

NOT finished, but lemme know what you all think.
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Old 08-02-2005, 08:35 AM
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Nice work 4get2.

The beauty of doing music videos is that you can go wild with effects without it looking out of place.

Good stuff!
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Old 08-02-2005, 08:48 AM
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Loved It,

I thought very well made,,,,,,,,,
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Old 08-02-2005, 10:20 AM
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I think it starts beautifully, but then kind of loses its way. After about 30 sec it loses momentum, in spite of the good music. For me, those final few effects just don't work very well. Nice and watchable, but could be far better.
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Nice work, for your first video thats pretty good.
I think after little more practice you will be able to hit the music and the effects a little better.
If a effect or scene change doesnt perfectly hit the beat or sound you are going for it doesnt flow properly.

I actually hired someone to do my music, and sound effects for my video.
My music has to be all original though.
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Thanks everyone. I am working on more footage and not using so many effects.
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mmm Cars

Great soundtrack works great With good timing with the first Burnout with the start of the guitar

My first clips had far to many effects in them, looking back now.

Like others, to many effects there, the intro in the field was stunning and left me thinking

All in all a great first clip, you should be very proud

Cant wait for the next one as you seem to be into the car scene like myself
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Originally Posted by Brian Gardner
mmm Cars

Great soundtrack works great With good timing with the first Burnout with the start of the guitar

My first clips had far to many effects in them, looking back now.

Like others, to many effects there, the intro in the field was stunning and left me thinking

All in all a great first clip, you should be very proud

Cant wait for the next one as you seem to be into the car scene like myself
Thanks..I am working on some changes and still getting familiar with pinnacle studio. Again all your feedback is appreciated.
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Made a second clip with some changes.

http://www.4get2.com/video3.wmv
Right Click save as....
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