Well, here's my trialer to my first video. Kinda lame, and I threw it together in a few hours. This isn't my best work by far. But I would appreciate any feedback, and maybe a 1 - 10 rating on my editing?

www.breedingpit.com/luke/final.wmv

Enjoi, and thanks.

Great sense of speed and excitement, but I think your editing tends to lose its way a bit IMO.

I like the backwards/forwards pieces, but they seem out of place to me. Might have been better placed in a sequence all their own - maybe not.

You've caught the fun side of it well.