As you maybe aware car vids aren't exactly my thing, but I must say I found this very good and watchable.
Nicely paced with a good variety of shots.
Being harsh (as it it generally very good) I thought some of the shots could have been composed a bit better - for example the shot at 2:46 has the car slightly off-centre. To me this looks like you'd aimed for centre, but missed. Better to have it fully centered or more obviously off-centre.
The same shot has a tilt down which was pretty smooth. Came to a stop. Then tilted a bit more. Watch for this.
Most of the cuts worked as they were between very different shots, but be careful when you cut between similar shots. The cut at 1:33 (from the almost full whot of the car to just the front) gives a feeling of having jumped bakwards in the pan.
From a personal taste point of view, I have t say I didn't think the film burn FX worked at all well, either with the subject or the music. They looked like they had just been bolted on because of a trend.
As for first time with the flycam - I'm very impressed!