Thread: I need some critical eyes on this

I personally prefer this to the first video. The blacks seem a bit crushed but I don't know what the original looks like. I think your missing a bit of a trick by not having some Foley sounds example squeaky pen sound when Harlequin is drawing the moustache on the story board also a thump sound when when she is hit with the car door, there may be other opportunities for more Foley to be added.

hehehe, the composer has been working on some cheesey sound effects instead. theres tweeting birds and comical bounce/bonk on the door opening... The final vid will be up on youtube tomorrow for the world to see I'll update the video link once its there

Hey hey,
final video has been uploaded with a blog post detailing what it was for and the process enjoy!
(links in first post)

Having read the brief and seen the last edit I see how it all fits together. This last edit with the new music works better. I think it is different enough to get you noticed and fits the brief well.

I wish you the best of luck with your application, I've got everything crossed for you.

Thanks MB

So it worked, I am through to the final four. Just an assessment day to go

Thanks for the help guys!

Remember us minnows when you're swimming with the sharks.

Good luck.

Originally Posted by fuzzymuffin

So it worked, I am through to the final four. Just an assessment day to go

That's fantastic. Keeping my fingers crossed for you.