Definitely shows your first use of a slider. Somewhat overused, and a few wobbly moments. But, thought went into a wide variety of shots and positions, which was good. A bit more close up detail would have been good, particularly anything that lights up!
As above but also I found it just a little dark. I liked the video as a whole and thought it was cut well to the music.
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thanks a lot for the comments!, I guess I was just overly excited to use the slider, didnt have a handi cam to get any other smooth shots.