Not bad, some really cool stuff in there.
The fantasy sequences were excellent (although your star was a bit too "Jim Carey" at times.)
A lot which needs sorting though.
The camera operator needs to watch the horizons, the camera was a tad off level quite a lot.
The sound was all over the shop.
Some of the cuts were not quite "wrong" enough to be quirky but wrong enough not to be right.
The "Granny" didn't look at all like a granny.
He bought a tin of baked beans in a Newsagents? It may be a small general store but we didn't see it.
All in all some parts were very good, other parts need a lot of tightening up.