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03-17-2005, 10:16 PM
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all this is is kids fighting, Nothing mutch but here you go... http://www.neptune.com/users/twj3/vi...twj3252063.wmv | 
03-17-2005, 10:28 PM
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Was this intentionally bad?
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03-17-2005, 10:30 PM
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Originally Posted by Marc Peters Was this intentionally bad? |
:lol:
I pose the same question as Marc.
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03-17-2005, 10:33 PM
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yeah, my friend shot about 2 hours of stuff for me and all it is, is that so i just took a few parts and after editing for about 10 minutes that is what i have, i know it sucks, but i thought you people might find it interesting, and since no one posted anything about my last video i just thought, why not...
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03-17-2005, 10:36 PM
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Spruce it up a bit. Learn from the other videos posted and add some *kick* to it.
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03-17-2005, 11:21 PM
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I agree, this is not good stuff, Moldy. You can do better than this - you must've had a basic idea at the start.
What about (a) a little intro? (b) some attention to your cuts? Try some transitions. (c) some appropriate music, off-beat maybe, or just plain erratic; [d] apply a theme, or some context?
Only suggestions, but little things give a video short the air of a 'finished piece'.
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03-17-2005, 11:37 PM
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Originally Posted by tone33 I agree, this is not good stuff, Moldy. You can do better than this - you must've had a basic idea at the start.
What about (a) a little intro? (b) some attention to your cuts? Try some transitions. (c) some appropriate music, off-beat maybe, or just plain erratic; [d] apply a theme, or some context?
Only suggestions, but little things give a video short the air of a 'finished piece'. |
A- I sort of added one
B- I dont really like transitions
C- Good idea, i did
D- I am still working on that
Again this was not shot but be, and i put almost no time into editing this but here you go.. Reedited, kids fighting http://www.neptune.com/users/twj3/vi...twj3252229.wmv | 
03-18-2005, 01:33 PM
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Edited - Fair point!
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03-18-2005, 03:31 PM
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Lost for words..... (and not in a good way, sorry!)
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03-18-2005, 06:47 PM
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I'm tempted to edit your link so nobody else has to see that. It's bad beyond belief.
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