Quite a nice story, but the main attraction is the fact it was one take. I've often thought I'd like to try this but it seems so beyond me.
Obviously the camerawork was a bit wobbly and there wee sone rather odd tilts (vcameraman not really lning up vertically) and I felt quite seasick at times and you're aware of the exposure business.
One part of the choregraphy whid did jump out at me as "wrong" was the turn back to the car at approx 0:58. Or rather it wasn't a turn back, but a continuation of a 360 degree pan. Othere than that nothing jumped out at me as particularly bad. I'd consider that a very good result for an 8 minute shot. Well done.