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Old 12-03-2008, 01:32 PM
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Hey Guys,

I have just finished my new logo and have done a little edit for it, I just wanted to get some thoughs, feedback etc..

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Old 12-03-2008, 01:41 PM
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Honestly? I'd have stopped it at two seconds... the rest is superfluous. The first two seconds gets the job done.
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Honestly? I'd have stopped it at two seconds... the rest is superfluous. The first two seconds gets the job done.

Completely agree with Andy. After about 2 seconds too much starts going on. Keep it simple.
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I agree also, the first 2 seconds were cool but then when it starts multiplying itself and everything it gets bad
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Just to add to what's already been said about the length...
It's a nice clean logo - good
You have MK then productions.co.uk underneath. I presume your website is "www.mkproductions.com"and not "productions.com" or "www.productions.com"? Get my point?
Major flaw - your tag line is misspelled! Put an apostrophe in, won't you?
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Originally Posted by TimStannard View Post
Major flaw - your tag line is misspelled! Put an apostrophe in, won't you?
I saw (briefly) MKproductions.co.uk.
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Stop at 4 secs.
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Originally Posted by Marc Peters View Post
I saw (briefly) MKproductions.co.uk.
Interesting. Maybe this suggests that in the confusion of working out whether the name was Productions or MKproductions I didn't even get as far as the top level domain and made an assumption.

Perhaps a bit of a "pulse" on the .co.uk would draw attention to that.

Funnily enough, I can't see where you got MKproductions (as opposed to MKProductions) from as (quite apart from the fact that MK is displayed on a separate line) "Productions" throughout the sequence shown with a capital P. Which indicates the start of a paragraph or name.

I still think it's a neat logo, but in need of the FULL website or domain name - mkproductions.co.uk and an apostrophe in "won't" and a chop after 4 secs.
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Apos'trope abus'e mus't be s'tamped out.
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Apos'trope abus'e mus't be s'tamped out.
Yeah I know, I can get a bit anal about it, but I do think it's important when you're promoting you're business to get these things right.
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