First video advert!

Rude Reality · #1 (**permalink**) 12-03-2008, 02:32 PM

Hey Guys,

I have just finished my new logo and have done a little edit for it, I just wanted to get some thoughs, feedback etc..

Cheers MK

YouTube - MKProductions Advert

Andy Lockwood · #2 (**permalink**) 12-03-2008, 02:41 PM

Honestly? I'd have stopped it at two seconds... the rest is superfluous. The first two seconds gets the job done.

Fingercuff · #3 (**permalink**) 12-03-2008, 03:44 PM

Originally Posted by Andy Lockwood

Honestly? I'd have stopped it at two seconds... the rest is superfluous. The first two seconds gets the job done.

Completely agree with Andy. After about 2 seconds too much starts going on. Keep it simple.

mamaluke · #4 (**permalink**) 12-03-2008, 04:19 PM

I agree also, the first 2 seconds were cool but then when it starts multiplying itself and everything it gets bad

TimStannard · #5 (**permalink**) 12-03-2008, 10:01 PM

Just to add to what's already been said about the length...
It's a nice clean logo - good
You have MK then productions.co.uk underneath. I presume your website is "www.mkproductions.com"and not "productions.com" or "www.productions.com"? Get my point?
Major flaw - your tag line is misspelled! Put an apostrophe in, won't you?

Marc Peters · #6 (**permalink**) 12-03-2008, 10:05 PM

Originally Posted by TimStannard

Major flaw - your tag line is misspelled! Put an apostrophe in, won't you?

I saw (briefly) MKproductions.co.uk.

Mark W · #7 (**permalink**) 12-03-2008, 11:06 PM

Stop at 4 secs.

TimStannard · #8 (**permalink**) 12-04-2008, 09:10 PM

Originally Posted by Marc Peters

I saw (briefly) MKproductions.co.uk.

Interesting. Maybe this suggests that in the confusion of working out whether the name was Productions or MKproductions I didn't even get as far as the top level domain and made an assumption.

Perhaps a bit of a "pulse" on the .co.uk would draw attention to that.

Funnily enough, I can't see where you got MKproductions (as opposed to MKProductions) from as (quite apart from the fact that MK is displayed on a separate line) "Productions" throughout the sequence shown with a capital P. Which indicates the start of a paragraph or name.

I still think it's a neat logo, but in need of the FULL website or domain name - mkproductions.co.uk and an apostrophe in "won't" and a chop after 4 secs.