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10-13-2008, 02:05 PM
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0 Videos nominated Video Of the Month(s): 0 | |  Trailer for my upcoming movie
watch the trailer and lemme knw how it is |
10-13-2008, 02:19 PM
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It's not good.
The music is dreadful, and totally out of place with a story about hatred and deceit. The titles are poor, and the footage does not want to make me see the finished product.
Well, you did ask.....
Cheers. GDR
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10-13-2008, 03:00 PM
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Dont sit on the fence GDR say what you really think LOL
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10-13-2008, 03:16 PM
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ya me too i just made it in a haste.. dint really think wat i was doing will improve it and show it to u guyz the u tell me howz it...
thanks for the TRUTH..appreciate it
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10-17-2008, 03:34 PM
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Originally Posted by GDR  It's not good.
The music is dreadful, and totally out of place with a story about hatred and deceit. The titles are poor, and the footage does not want to make me see the finished product.
Well, you did ask.....
Cheers. GDR |
I have to agree with GDR. This looks totally mashed together. Random fonts, random music, random video effects. Really not a fan.
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10-17-2008, 10:03 PM
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Originally Posted by pushki123 ya me too i just made it in a haste.. dint really think wat i was doing |
In view of that I'll not watch it, there's no value in putting something up if you already know it has major failings, really it's only worth it if you think it's as good as you can get, or if an opinion of yours about something might give a different view from an audience, or to reinforce or allay any doubts you may have.
At least you had responses to yours!  |
10-19-2008, 01:13 PM
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Hi Dude.
Less is more when it comes to tpyefaces - dont use too many - three max as a guide, and pick them carefully as thay all 'speak' in a different way.
The music sort of clashed a bit and even for a trialer that was a bit short.
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10-20-2008, 09:42 PM
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I agree with all the above, the text work is so bad it distracts from the video, I think you are trying to be too clever with the titles ( fonts)
Just watch any TV commercial, or film intro, there you will see fonts which work, and take note of their screen duration, just copy the masters of the art.
Please read below as well....The Mad Bomber.
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