It's a superb video and all of the above is right, but like anything there's going to be a gap somehere for a viewer asked to review, and I watched it keenly until something sprang into my mind that began to nag a bit. So this is a personal suggestion for enhancement for the future as something I'd like to see, rather than a difinitive 'ahh but you should have done this'. With me?
I became conscious of the camera position. The thing for me with this approach is that it gives a feeling that you're looking at the subjects through a hole in the wall. Being a hole in the wall it can't move, so the only dynamics that occurred looked to be through motion control in post and zooming, so perspectives remained consistent throughout.
I personally would have liked to have seen some camera movement. Imagine a crane shot starting from above the singer gradually coming down with a simultaneous tilt up, so that the subject stays central, the opposite elsewhere in the vid, 'tilt' the background images and text to match, or maybe oppose for an added dynamic. Maybe a pull zoom, or something or other to give the video the third dimension of depth through perspective shift, rather than foreground/background aerial positioning which gives a visual impression of layers rather than defined depth. Difficult to explain really.
For the record I liked the track sonically, the genre thing is irrelevent to this. The fact is it was a good mix, good EQ and engaging in tone. Good stuff!
Last edited by Jerry Hill; 10-08-2008 at 05:31 PM.
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