Couple of comments I'd like to make here....
1) Holy Crap, the opening shots are almost exactly what I have planned for my competition entry. You'll see what I mena in a month or two. I was also considering some colour effect and/or a bit of desaturation to get the mood I'm after.
2) Looks like you have the same problems as me, trying to get a widescreen presentation out as a WMV. I noticed the black bars top and bottom
3) Following on from 1 above, you could probably have entered it in the competition. I could see it working with the 'Sinister' soundtrack.
Good stuff though. I liked it.