The Watcher 1 & 2

ChrisRLive · #1 (**permalink**) 05-25-2008, 02:22 PM

The Watcher 1:
( removed by mark w)

The Watcher 2:
YouTube - The Watcher 2

Both Videos are directed and edited by me...
We made them up as we went along.
I made the first one completely on my own a few days ago, then The Watcher 2 the next day.

Mark W · #2 (**permalink**) 05-25-2008, 08:23 PM

Please read the guidelines if you are a noob befor posting here.

Only one film per post. I have therefore removed one of your submissions.

TimStannard · #3 (**permalink**) 05-25-2008, 09:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mark W

I have therefore removed one of your submissions.

And in my opinion the wrong one! (Feel free to delete my comments about The Watcher 1, Mark

)

Chris,

The first, a solo effort, whilst technically poor, was a much better film. The idea was better, more feasible and in the mold of Scary Movie. You acted the part totally straight and this is the only way to act a spoof.

The Watcher 2, on the other hand, whilst slightly better technically, helped no doubt by having someone to watch what you are filming at times, was just a couple of kids mucking about.

Choice and use of music for #1 was excellent. Barely mediocre for #2.

ChrisRLive · #4 (**permalink**) 05-25-2008, 09:09 PM

Yeah I was thinking about removing "The Watcher 2" and remaking it with a script this time.

Mark W · #5 (**permalink**) 05-26-2008, 12:37 PM

Well - I watched a bit of both and perhaps decided wrong... I went with two cos it had your mates in but one did have moments of suspense - make up your mind what you are making this time - those walks past the sofa just got too slapstick but the messages were spooky - as for the p line - looked like you ran out of ideas...

Keep the spooky vibe and cut things shorter.