Nice - you put lots of work into that I can see, nice props, folio, death scenes - nice gore.
Intro maybe a bit long.
It would have been sooo much better with a bit more careful camera work - it was all very shakey. If you are shotting h held keep zoomed out as much as poss. Tracking shots should be smooth a well thought out and generally shouldnt reverse direction.
Adding some weight to a small cmaera can help steady hand holding.
Many of your shots would have been better from a tripod.
Keep em coming !
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