Hey,

Ive just completed my first ever short for a local competition and id love to know what you all think. I wrote, directed, edited and did the sound also and im very happy with the result for a first attempt. Needless to say there are many things which could be improved but hey...you learn more doin it than asking 10 million questions!

YouTube - DOUBT

PS...Its quite darK

............anyone??

hey dude
just watched it, ill be honest with you, it didnt seem to go anywere, there was some nice editing in it and the main actor did a good performance, but overall it was tiresome and i did find myself watching the status bar.
with a few more cuts, you could of made it more interesting.
technically its fine, apart from the lighting, but i didnt find it very entertaining
look forward to see more of your work though

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