Even before i watched this i was wary - People often dont realise that "holiday videos" are only interesting to them and their friends. Its only if you do something interesting with the footage like create a narrative or have an interesting hook on the edit that it may become remotley interesting to others.
Having watched the Video clip - It was ok. Not sure what comments you are looking for. The edit was ok, the footage was ok but a lil dull in places. All in all nothing to write home about. It was what i expected it to be - a holiday snapshot video. | 
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