Hey guys this is my first video since i got my Sanyo HD camcorder. Was bored so deiced to get a friend to show her house. Edited it intro a cribs episode with ony vegas so tell me what you guys think.

YouTube - MTV Cribs Wenonah Whalley Full Episode

Where to start...

Audio levels are rubbish, way too high for the intro, and the audio on your cam is poor.
You need a wide angle lens for internal shots, and the shots should have been framed better.
You haven't white balanced, or set the exposer propperly for any scene.
Some of the scenes are too long and borring, the camera isn't steady.

Not funny enough for a spoof, and not clean enough for a copy. At best it's pretty average for a home video TBH.

Ripping off someone elses copyright is also lame. Make your own titles and music, or buy the respective licences.