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04-21-2007, 11:14 PM
|  | Member HDTV | | | Join Date: May 2006 Location: Hyderabad, INDIA
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Please watch my new video at YouTube - Dopidi
Please gimme your feedback and suggestions.
Thank You,
Ravi Vide
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04-22-2007, 02:32 AM
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You did a good job, you should be proud. The only real problem I see is the audio quilty and the crdeits should be a diffrent color and font because their prett hard to read.
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04-22-2007, 02:54 AM
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Hi,
Thanks for your comments.
Yes. I identified the problem now. The credits are not clear. That was a mistake. I am sorry for that.
Audio quality of the background score seems to be Ok to me. May be you are talking about the voice of the person. We did not do voice over as there are very few dialogues in the movie.
Anyway I noted down these things and will keep in mind while making next video.
Thank you very much.
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04-22-2007, 10:02 AM
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I agree with chapman but would also like to add - the head exploding was a little over the top. Such a small gun would not make such an impact. otherwise it was great.
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04-22-2007, 04:00 PM
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i liked it, and agree that it doesn't need subtitles.
Close up of a plastic gun was maybe a bit silly tho.
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04-22-2007, 06:18 PM
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I love your stuff!
My only comment is that, in the future, you should think about using a reflector to throw some light into the shadows when filming in bright sunlight.
You obviously like horror and blood, keep up the good work!
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04-23-2007, 04:50 AM
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Thanks to All for your comments and suggestions.
Irishmark, The head explosion was over the top. That was actually inspired by Andrew Cramer's Action Movie Essentials tutorial. I liked that effect so much that I could not resist myself from putting that effect in my movie. But I was not able to get a bigger gun. :-(
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