Thread: Good Indepedent Film (Links Inside)

Hey guys I'm just posting a movie I made in High school, looking for comments and critiques in every way. Thanks in advance, the links below are in order of the movie.

Liquid Steel 1




Liquid Steel 2

Just from watching the first part or liquid steel 1 you've got some work to do. Well first of all i do like the idea of the whole tournament thing and what not but you could have put more into the story. Um the actors......just need some more training but hey your in high school so they have time to improve. When you were in some places the lighting indoors and from the sun just wasn't working for me. I'm not gonna knock you for the picture quality because thats mainly on your camera so don't worry about that. The camera angles you could have used more close ups. Anyway i'm gonna check out the rest later when i get a chance but hey for high school work man just keep it up and keep on trying you'll get up there.

P.S. i like the music you used from Dbz, tekken, and other games

yea i've since analyzed all the numerous errors in it but it was actually a high school project and my 1st film ever.

Well thats cool man at least you've already noticed them its always good to start early so you can learn. Like heres my first video its final fantasy battle between me and my friend

Then go to the post Rick James to see my newest video so you can see i was like that too.
But anyway man do you have a new stuff?