User VideosYou've finally mastered the art of video editing and you're just itching to share the fruits of your efforts with the whole of the world. Well, if you can host your video on the internet, post a link here for everyone to see! Note that this forum is used for critical assessment of posted material. By posting your work here you agree to have your work subject to constructive critism. If you're easily offended, it is recommended that you do not post
Hello, I recently finished this video, and it'd be cool if I could have some constructive criticism from you guys. I'm trying to progress as a film-maker, and I think I've done pretty well with this movie. I did the directing and editing and most of the camera work.
Enjoyed that. Not bad at all, but maybe needs a bit of attention to detail. Cutting some scenes a bit shorter would crisp it up and add to the dramatic pieces. Likewise some facial close-ups with more serious expressions.
Really funny in places, though. Each sequence built up quite well. A nice amusing bit of work.