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11-22-2006, 02:50 PM
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Here is my second video. This time I tried to make a horror movie.
You can view it at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0dcYc1Im68g
Comments and Suggestions are always welcome.
Thanks,
Jagdish
(Ravi Vide)
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11-22-2006, 03:32 PM
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I like this a lot. I think the acting is convincing, and it’s a good edit. With nice continuity, the story is well told and it holds the viewer’s interest.
Is Bhayam 2 another episode of the same story?
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11-22-2006, 04:34 PM
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Tony, Thanks for your nice comments. Bhayam 2 is going to have a similar twist at the end but totally different story and different location.
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11-23-2006, 08:39 AM
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good video
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11-23-2006, 06:51 PM
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Thanks threedoors. Please don't forget to give your feedback on my next video Bhayam 2. (Bhayam means Fear). Right now I am fighting with the script. You can watch it on December 6th. This time I will add subtitles so that you will understand what they are talking.
I found that some low pitch sound affects are not appearing in youtube streaming. Clarity version of this video can be downloaded at http://www.savefile.com/files/283259
-For your entertainment only,
Jagdish(Ravi Vide)
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11-23-2006, 10:10 PM
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Hey, that was great. Wild mokeys too, cool! To British eyes that is a suprise.
I thought maybe the middle bit, when the guy was looking for his friend was a bit long.
The acting really looked good to me too.
Thanks.
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11-24-2006, 11:45 AM
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Thanks Mark.
I think you are right. While I was editing I thought the same whether am I dragging that middle part. Actually that searching part did not come as good as I expected. That guy is supposed to be scared by the location. May be my camera placement was not correct. I would have sprayed some water on his face and showed some closeups to show his nervous. Anyway I am very happy for their performances especially in the climax.
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11-25-2006, 09:43 AM
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Nice video!
I thought that the acting, camerawork and plot were very good (can't comment on the dialogue!) and it was very enjoyable to watch. It could do with a bit of tightening up in places but for a first video... Look out Bollywood.
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11-26-2006, 11:54 AM
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Thanks Guru.
Yes. Bollywood is in top of my hitlist  |
12-01-2006, 02:33 PM
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Originally Posted by jagdish  Here is my second video. This time I tried to make a horror movie.
You can view it at
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0dcYc1Im68g
Comments and Suggestions are always welcome.
Thanks,
Jagdish
(Ravi Vide) |
i think its nice!!!  i enjoyed it!
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