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10-06-2006, 06:16 PM
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I've been thinking of a way to start this shot off from a blank screen. As a work-in-progress I've got this so far. http://www.alandmills.co.uk/Opener.wmv
As a pheasability study it's ok i think it's a buit 'busy' and there's certainly stuff I will change.
Please critique.
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10-06-2006, 07:25 PM
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Pretty fine work Alan. My only thought really is... Is this a bit psycadellic for what looks like will be a fairly normal video? I can see how brilliant it would be in, say a music vid, but an award presentation? Not sure. Very good job though, none the less. |
10-06-2006, 07:33 PM
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Yo that opener effect was mad hot i liked it. But like turn media said it would be better for a music video. Keep it up though
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10-06-2006, 07:39 PM
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Nice work.
maybe easing the keyframes would be an improvement.
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10-06-2006, 08:05 PM
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Can't disagree with most of these comments.
But as it;s all done in Premiere Pro I can't easy-ease the keyframes unfortunately. I should have though of that though. d'oh!
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10-06-2006, 08:35 PM
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If you right click on the keyframes you will get ease in/out options
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10-06-2006, 11:38 PM
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Originally Posted by miwhel  If you right click on the keyframes you will get ease in/out options | That'll teach me not to open any video editting software for a few months won't it? I'm forgetting what you can do. :(
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10-10-2006, 10:14 AM
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Hi Alan
That was a great opener, really grabs your attention, and yes I see what some of the comments are suggesting but it rather depends what the presentation is about.
The opener suggests to me "the coming together" or "fitting together like a jig-saw" which if it applies to the overall concept is fab.
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