I watched the one about underaged drinking, and the one about the homless girl.
I thought the first one was excelent! It was smooth, and well done. I like the second one, but I have two concerns. The first is that some of the cuts were made mid-sound,(ei. when the girl screams in the beggining, and during a cut while the homless girl is playing the harmonica, it cuts from one shot to another, while a car horn was honking in the backround.) wich made some cuts a litte jaring. The second concern was the pacing, I think that I was in need of some tighter editing, though I understand that these are more or less experiments. But over all I thought they were great.