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    Any feedback would be great, thanks
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    Nice idea. I liked it as a concept for a video and I think you should do more like it.

    I dont think the driving fitted at the end and those reaaly interesting close ups need to be steadier and the pans smoother I think to get the best visual effect. It would work longer too.

    The close up on the face really got my attention. Music worked.

    Nice to see something a bit arty and experimental.

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    Definitely on the pans and zooms, a tripod would have done you well, maybe the driving would have fitted better at the beginning, travelling to where you wanted to go in your thoughts/dreams.

    Nice clip though. enjoyed watching.

    Thanks

    Mike.
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    Yep, a nice effort, I get the feeling there’s some lovely sentiment behind this. Sweet & simple always means good to watch, in my book and this really appeals to me personally. Tree bark and shadows are random patterns that always fascinate.

    I agree the driving looks slightly out of place.

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    Thanks guys, I appreciate the feedback.

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    Good effort. Would have done better if you make use of a tripod.

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