I watched it all, I thought the editing was good,
the bit where he's walking down the street and then it seamlessly goes to the white-space is good.
I haven't googled mirror theory so I don't really know what's going on, but the editing suited the pace and style of the piece.
How are you going to add the mirrors in the white-space?
That could be tricky if you want the effect I'm imagining, (him walking past mirrors), wouldn't it have been easier to just film the mirrors?
also, the focus/dof stuff with the taps is nice, but it's a bit quick, maybe it's just me, but I thought it should have been a bit slower to fit in with the rest of the video.
Really good overall.
Panasonic SD9, Panasonic NVGS-75, Canon MV600i