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Thread: School Project, What do you think?

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    Heres a little school project we had to do. Its a gr11, 12 mixed media class that we have at our high school. We got put into groups to brainstorm and make scripts for a 30 second ad. We chose to do it on an online dating service. We called it Sunset Soulmate. Just curious as to what you guys think?

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    Overall I like it, is it finished/submitted?

    I think it could do with an intro shot for the girl, like the guys ball-throwing shot.

    I'd add a more prominent title at the end after they walk away with a bigger centred SunsetSoulmate.com logo.

    I think the letter-boxing should have been consistent throughout, it looks unprofessional when borders appear, disappear, re-appear in different sizes etc. but that's a minor point and an easy fix.

    I would have made it brighter, more colourfull after they've found each other, but it might be the compression making it look a bit more dreary than it is on TV.

    The idea was good though, and the shots and simple editing worked well I think. tough to do it all in 30 seconds but you managed it.
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    Thanks alot man. Yah it is a lot brighter at the end. Its just youtube sucks and you lose alot of quality. Very helpful. Gotta hand it in on Wednesday.

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    It was good but it could have used some more audio
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    I liked it a lot

    Only criticism would be the lack of audio... a voice over would be the icing on the cake

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    hahahhahah utube sucks!!! i would never use them!!
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    Yah I know. Whatever though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sithxace
    hahahhahah utube sucks!!! i would never use them!!
    Then what do you use?

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    Right now I use Putfile.. unlimited up load but the max file size is 25 mb. Thers another one that has 500mb upload but I cant remember the name at the moment.
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