I viewed about half of your video titled Beijing Devils. The biggest critique I can give is this: mess with your interlacing. It's pretty close to unwatchable with the field interlacing as it is. I'm not sure what program you used to make and convert the video, but you should try other settings, 'cause what you did didn't work.
also, don't be afraid to edit more closely. You had 1 clip per 3-4 seconds. It can be 5-6 clipse per second.