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    Default My first script.

    Ok yeah I know this sucks, but hey i tryed right? LOL anyways here is the Script to a short im planning on working on. I wrote this in one day so its not great at all I know and its my first one. I just wanted to see what you guys thought about it? Tell me if I did it in proper format if you could. Thanks

    http://www.geocities.com/fusion_keep...lent_Night.doc

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    couldn't comment on the format as I'm no expert but I like the idea, its got some nice touches in it.

    I like the fact that Santa just has to finish the milk and cookie even though he might get caught.

    Should be good when you film it.

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    The very fact that you've taken the time to script what you're filming suggests attention to detail. Doesn't matter what it looks like IMO, just that you've tried!

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    Really good. Schmoltzy, but then Christmas is all about schmoltz. I look forward to seeing the finished movie on Christmas Day. (If it snows by then)

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    this is relly nice script and i would love to see the finnished script

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