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    The groups thoughts on this Intro would be helpful

    only 6/7 secs long

    www.harry73.fsnet.co.uk/film/corvus.wmv

    Thanks

    Chris

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    Way to busy for my taste.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Turn Media
    Way to busy for my taste.

    I would have to agree, just too much happening, it needs to be toned down a bit

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    it is impossble to read the text and is far to busy.

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    This is kind of crazy, but hey I like the attempt like everyone said just tone it down and it will look pretty cool.

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    I agree with eveyone else - I might add - sorry if its harsh - I think the colours clash really badly making it a lil ugly - sorry jus my opinion.

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    Quote Originally Posted by irishmark
    I agree with eveyone else - I might add - sorry if its harsh - I think the colours clash really badly making it a lil ugly - sorry jus my opinion.
    i agree!

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    the audio is cool, but i agree with the others... a simple black background with white text would be just as effective...

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    Quote Originally Posted by moldytoaster
    the audio is cool, but i agree with the others... a simple black background with white text would be just as effective...
    sorry moaldy but i partially disagree with you on this one - Jack is letting his creative juices flow by stepping out of the "white text on black" box. To go that way isn't really all that creative - its just plain and normal. In my view his colour choice is just a lil off but he is getting there. If he can get a good colour combination it will look sweet.


    Jack - the reason why it's too busy is all the foggy/smokey effect on the text - that makes it un-readable

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    I agree with you all,,,,way, way to loaded.......shouldn't have put the one with the filters up.............

    The effect i was after is more the movement/sound

    Don't like normal txt,,, do like stepping out of a box hahaha

    All your comments are constructive which is what this group to me is all about,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so keep being honest and i'll keep working on things

    Chris

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