As above , keep it fast paced, keep the shots quick and too the point.
Dont linger on one person too long, that banter at teh end could have been cut down shorter and had better impact on the outcome
Get in closer to the things going on, seeing something on film taken from a distance makes the person feel he / she is watching from a distance and not In THere with the action
Great work, would like to see more
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