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    This is another nice video I put together of our trip to the seaside. The shots taken in this video were from Flamborough cliffs, thornwick bay and Bridlington.



    i promise tim this was all shot before your feedback, close up and front faces are coming soon haha, thanks for the feedback
    Last edited by JourneyVerse; 08-23-2020 at 04:19 PM.

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    Two things stand out

    • I think you need to be ruthless with your editing and lose clips you're not happy with; and
    • You should think about the flow of the clips and look for natural transitions from one clip to the next.

    Here's a challenge - take all that footage, edit it down to less than 60 seconds and post the results. Out of interest, did you extend the last clip until the music ended?

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    thanks for your feedback, i did not extend the last clip, the next video i have created i believe to be my best yet, has more flow, clips and looks asthetically better, thanks for actually watching and giving feedback, at the end of the day i want to create videos that the people watching actually want to watch

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    Quote Originally Posted by JourneyVerse View Post
    tat the end of the day i want to create videos that the people watching actually want to watch
    And hopefully people here will help you to do that - even if the advice might conflict at times (but it is an art not a science)
    Tim

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    Quote Originally Posted by TimStannard View Post
    And hopefully people here will help you to do that - even if the advice might conflict at times (but it is an art not a science)
    well said, i have been looking around trying to influence myself and trying to find how i want my shots to be perceived, the different angles and close ups definitely help tell a better story, however i am my own critic and i will say im not the best a telling a story with my clips, but with more knowledge of how to film clips i hope to change this soon

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