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    Hi,

    I recently uploaded new videos to my new playlist "Moscow, Russia Park-Life".

    It's just to enjoy and say Hi from Moscow to everybody.



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    2nd link removed.
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    Hi and welcome. Just a quick note to say I've removed your second video but please feel fee to add it again in its own thread. We have a rule here - one video per thread. That way we know which video the comments refer to.
    As you've posted in this section, I presume you will want constructive criticism (hooray!) so i'll take a look later.
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    hello. It looks a lot like Canada.

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    I'd suggest trying to tell a story simply before worrying about the trickery. Every cut, everey effect should be used to help tell the story, direct the viewer's attention or create/support an emotion. There seemed to me to be little or no motication for any of the effects (apart from cutting sympathetically with the music).
    A couple of good basic tests for whether an edit works for a film or not are:
    1. Would it make any difference if the clips were in a different order?
    2. Would it make any difference if the film started at a late clip or finished at an earlier clip?
    Tim

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