Hi there folks.

Long story short:
I want to create (full blown) 3D cinematic trailer, and show that to some producers, asking for funds for complete 90 min. 3D animated movie.
The settings is medieval Europe (Serbia), and Ottoman invasion towards Europe.

Before I went into a (complex) environment creation, and hire people to do me (complex) character models, I wanted to create animatic to make sure everything works in terms of pacing, and composition.
So, here it is:

(please, ignore the bad graphics and animation (all will be replaced) (this is just animatic, focus on camera, cuts, overall pacing ),

I'd like to hear any advice how to improve this, any ideas what to change, please tell me whatever is bothering you, etc...
Help me make this epic!

Thanks in advance!