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    Post My first project. "life station"

    Hi!
    First things first, English is my second language and I've been studying it just for a year, so keep your horses if you see my mistakes, please))
    I wanna share my first project that contains 5 art works, 5 videos and a dialog which helps understand videos and works. I don't know if it's allowed to share a link on behance, but I'm pretty sure that I can add youtube links)
    Maybe someone will like it (it would be nice), but as all of us I wanna grow and do better, so I'm open as hell to your feedback and criticism.

    #1 birth


    #2 feeling


    #3 day n nite


    #4 fade


    #5 death


    And here you can look at the whole project with dialog and arts

    So thanks for watching and let me know what you think about it.
    Last edited by a.8ight; 01-09-2019 at 08:04 PM.

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    It's not really my thing and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it except perhaps in some weird music video's. Aside from that it looks well thought out and balanced.
    I can't give you points for improvement since this is just art and with art it's generally a "like it or not" case once the artist doesn't make technical mistakes and since it's not really my thing I can't really spot technical mistakes that easy either.
    Maybe not the most helpful comment I guess... anyway, good luck!
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    Man, thanks. U right that it's difficult to point out what could be changed and you're right. but, u can just point something that's unpleasant and disturbing from your point of view. Maybe it's more subjective, but it's still interesting and can bring some food to think about.
    Last edited by a.8ight; 01-10-2019 at 04:13 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by a.8ight View Post
    Man, thanks. U right that it's difficult to point out what could be changed and you're right. but, u can just point something that's unpleasant and disturbing from your point of view. Maybe it's more subjective, but it's still interesting and can bright some food to think about.
    Fair point. I suppose what mostly throws me off is the strobing/flashing.
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    it's interesting!!

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